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good job

1) improve your samples, PLEASE.

2) some sounds were very over-powering

3) you used rapture II from toxic biohazard. using ready made arps and loops isnt skillful

4) you prove your knowledge of fl studio... you put an excellent lfo on the snare.
you used a slide on the synth

good job

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not bad... too 8-bit for me though

this was very 8-bit/16-bit for my liking. you should try improving your samples next time.

Good Job

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Peace out...

i loved hermite

hermite made me laugh so hard.
and now hes gone

UltraPitchFork responds:

:,(

EXCELLENT!

there was nothing about this i didnt like. it was perfect...

the beginning was excellent, i love the way you made a song using just a piano.
with no technical knowledge involved just you your hands and a piano. hehe

it was like 5 piano pieces all sewn together by excellent transition

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a great piece of work keep it up

Stalagmite responds:

thats fab man! thanks for these reviews. it really kind of you. :D:D:D i am pleased you found the transitions worked well, as i say i thought they sounded to different to work together, but i think the ideas work well together some how. thanks so much for this review. your awesome! :D:D:D smile smile smile !

not bad

you did it pretty well the only things that would of made it better for me are

1) better transitions between verses and chorus

2) The kick should of been more distorted and had alot more bass for hardstyle also reverb would have made it nice =].

3!!!!) ok this would have bumped it up to a ten it was really plain when you just had the percussions and the lyrics going, you should have had a pad in the background or a sweeper of some sort.

could you tell me the tempo on this so i can fix that and slap it on my ipod?

Djzylo responds:

ya, if your talking about bpm it was 140, and thanks for the review, i was still figuring out the master mixer and automation, im currently working on a hardcore song and hopefuly it will be alot better than this, and yeah i know i need base, i just always forget it xD

EXCELLENT

i loved the light synth in the background it really got me bouncing up and down lol.

the lead is nice but later on it gets a bit grainy rave music should have a lead that goes pop boom bang or Pow. your lead sounds like what you would hear in techno. but when it goes away it sounds awesome.

anyway wether it sounds like rave or not ITS STILL AWESOME!!!!

i really enjoyed it (faved)

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Adachiskindagod responds:

thanks man appreciate it

AWESOME!!!

The kick makes it sound like the intro to an epic trance song. i mate make morning in chernobyl continued and make it progress into a sexy trance song

Georgem124 <-DJGM->

good job

this should be ambient

Not bad its good infact, but it should be under ambient not dance =]

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SonicJ responds:

Oh, ambient? Maybe i'll make that change :D
I just thought when I made the break come in to the song, it counted as dance.
Thanks for teh review !
:D

this is more like ambient lol

not bad, i think this would be better off as techno though. and if at about 30 seconds you kicked it off into a techno/trance thingy it would be awesome

WTF

from halfway to the end was awesome but you should have got better sounds for it. the 8-bitness really doesnt work for me and just because its 8-bit it you dont have to have SHIT DRUMS!!!

good game

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