this isnt trance?
im not sure what this is...
its not very good. its out of key and its got bad transitions. and bad lots of things....
keep trying though.
and remember
if at first you dont succeed
fail and fail again....
GeorgeM124 <-Audio-warfare->
kinda bad...
it sounds like a song ive heard somewhere. greenday or something. its hard to tell though.
anyway thanks for the favourite. =]
what happened to its kinda cool rofl.
wow you get all that help from f-777 and envy
Was a great rave song, BUT
NOW THIS IS A BIG BUT!
im being serious i love big buts and i cannot lie. okay basically the volume control sucked. i cant help but feel everything was competing to be the loudest. the kick was major clipping.
Tips
you seriously need to stick a limiter compressor or soft clipper on the master track on the mixer dude. that was insanely distorted and loud.
Audio-Warfare!
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Good job nonetheless! do you mean best of the week or top 50 by top 5?
This is a old song Now I ask you to listen to My newer stuff When this song was made I had no Idea the concept of mixing Or mastering Are anything really.
not bad!!!
I actually expected some variations of the original melody!
How does it feel to be friends with one of the best authors on newgrounds sfapil?
THATS RIGHT! I GOT BEST OF THE WEEK!
anyways, i havent started yet! ill get to work now! and ill post it tonight!
He he... don't get too cocky. The hard part now is actually staying on top ^_*
Regarding the challenge... Technically you have two advantages:
1) The melody is yours and fits your mentality of music making
2) You've heard mine ^__^
Can't wait to see what you'll come up with.
You got the melody wrong
you got the melody wrong. and it was very repetitive. please try harder rofl.
good job nevertheless
I'm confused.
You realise it's a cover yeah?
Because the melody is right.
I can't even be bothered to try to explain, it's too early
very nice!
ive never actually tried a club song im too used to my trance and techno to try a different genre.
but it sounds very good. good use of reverb kick and a gated sequence.
however i have to drop one point because the transitions werent very good. you just dropped all the instruments and went yer whatever lol.
the vocals arent very good either. you hear those sorts of vocals every day. i would actually just prefer there was no vocals.
the hats were a bit gay. try adding some reverb to give them a more ominous feel or even add a phaser or panner (like you did at the beggining)
dont think im saying the song is bad its very good every song has faults im just pointing them out.
overall though not a bad song.
you, got a good point, atm my studio is stuffed, so i'll get right on it when i got it sorted out, thx
its not that bad.
you have reFX nexus. i recognise the sample used "hands up bells 3" i use it in almost all my songs. you didnt use cosmic coverage or space exploration i always use one of them in my hard style or hardcore songs.
but yer you should try a bit harder. i can tell you put no effort into this
yeah i have reFX Nexus
I dont know if you have read but i was really really bored when i made this
just picked a random midi and some samples, the last bit i will use for my next song and im gonna make something based on Frozen Babylon, a song from the Unreal Tournament 3
gonna make something proper after this..
Even so, thank you for the review
very nice could use alot of work
great melody, sounds pretty cool. its a step up from the rest of the stuff on newgrounds.
btw are you interested on collab on this project? if you are pm me for more info.
p.s, i think this could be turned into something really cool
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