NICE!
SOME GO BLIND DUE TO OVER-EXPOSURE TO PURE AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!
not bad, i think it was really cool...
good job.
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NICE!
SOME GO BLIND DUE TO OVER-EXPOSURE TO PURE AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!
not bad, i think it was really cool...
good job.
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We need eyedrops...
and you call my drums bad!
no offense but these drums are worse than mine... so i dont get where you was coming from. the guitar melody wasnt too good ( i can tell you dont listen to much rock music) the random fast bits ruined it. and had no chords in the structure. this song would of sounded great with some power chords.
oh the hit has kind of ruined it.
not a bad try though...
youve just started with music so keep going! your not doing bad for a beginner .
oh and dont put rate and review until youve got quite a few fans. ive learned myself it kind of pisses people off and your songs get zero bombed
well, i never said my music was better. but n/e way...i liked the hits...lol, w/e, thx for the review and that bit of advice at the end.
good job
1) improve your samples, PLEASE.
2) some sounds were very over-powering
3) you used rapture II from toxic biohazard. using ready made arps and loops isnt skillful
4) you prove your knowledge of fl studio... you put an excellent lfo on the snare.
you used a slide on the synth
good job
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not bad... too 8-bit for me though
this was very 8-bit/16-bit for my liking. you should try improving your samples next time.
Good Job
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Peace out...
i loved hermite
hermite made me laugh so hard.
and now hes gone
:,(
EXCELLENT!
there was nothing about this i didnt like. it was perfect...
the beginning was excellent, i love the way you made a song using just a piano.
with no technical knowledge involved just you your hands and a piano. hehe
it was like 5 piano pieces all sewn together by excellent transition
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a great piece of work keep it up
thats fab man! thanks for these reviews. it really kind of you. :D:D:D i am pleased you found the transitions worked well, as i say i thought they sounded to different to work together, but i think the ideas work well together some how. thanks so much for this review. your awesome! :D:D:D smile smile smile !
not bad
you did it pretty well the only things that would of made it better for me are
1) better transitions between verses and chorus
2) The kick should of been more distorted and had alot more bass for hardstyle also reverb would have made it nice =].
3!!!!) ok this would have bumped it up to a ten it was really plain when you just had the percussions and the lyrics going, you should have had a pad in the background or a sweeper of some sort.
could you tell me the tempo on this so i can fix that and slap it on my ipod?
ya, if your talking about bpm it was 140, and thanks for the review, i was still figuring out the master mixer and automation, im currently working on a hardcore song and hopefuly it will be alot better than this, and yeah i know i need base, i just always forget it xD
EXCELLENT
i loved the light synth in the background it really got me bouncing up and down lol.
the lead is nice but later on it gets a bit grainy rave music should have a lead that goes pop boom bang or Pow. your lead sounds like what you would hear in techno. but when it goes away it sounds awesome.
anyway wether it sounds like rave or not ITS STILL AWESOME!!!!
i really enjoyed it (faved)
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thanks man appreciate it
AWESOME!!!
The kick makes it sound like the intro to an epic trance song. i mate make morning in chernobyl continued and make it progress into a sexy trance song
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good job
this should be ambient
Not bad its good infact, but it should be under ambient not dance =]
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Oh, ambient? Maybe i'll make that change :D
I just thought when I made the break come in to the song, it counted as dance.
Thanks for teh review !
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