Beautiful
could be better, i can tell your new to ambient style because of the way its composed and the lack of good automation and electronic instruments in the song. this is probably more like classical than anything.
nevertheless not bad. i wish i could comeup with melodies like that. i can make a whole song in seconds after ive made a melody. its just finding that melody that baffles me xD.
Nah... an electronic sounding instrument would've ruined it, I think. However, you're right about the not-being-ambient bit. I guess I'll change the genre to classical then.
Thanks ^_^
AWESOME!
The combined efforts of two awesome artists. this is what can be done when live music and studio music is combined. we can create beautifl music like this!
i must try to make a song like this.
Audio-Warfa... you know what i cba to put my friggin showname under every comment how about just george xD
Thanks for defining me as awesome ^_^. The true awesome artist is Stalagmite really.
Couldn't agree more. Live instruments give a soul to music that no software can surpass.
Good luck with your future efforts. The way you're improving, you'll become pro in no time ^__^.
i think a saw...
a saw synth with a techno melody would go nice. i know what i would do in my head, i wish i could show it to you xD
this is very nice im lovin' it.
you have been gone for a long time but you dont fail to amaze me
I MUST improve a lot of things, but this time ... I CAN!! Now I can save projects, so I'll probably improve it indefinitely.
Thanks, once again, for the tips ^_*. I'll keep your suggestions in mind.
Cheers.
very cool
where have you gone sfapil? i have missed you muchly...
this is very nice, lonely, cold and creepy would make a great intro to a techno song if you brought in a nice melody and a bassline perhaps a guitar would go nicely.
<-Audio-Warfare->
Yeah, I've been rather busy these days and couldn't spend too much time on Newgrounds. (Thanks for caring ^_^)
Thanks for the tips ^_*. I'll see what I can do.
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P.S. have you changed your name?
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i hate clap, and the synths generally need improving and the sam ewith the melodies.
its basically the same melody on about 5 different instruments with a weird phasing sound i have heard somewhere on sytrus in the background.
nevertheless good try, needs alot of improvement
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Sex in the form of music...
Awesome. nice use of the celestial sound from fl studio i like the way you edited it to make it a cool synth that had the same effect.
the automation was subtle but had a great influence on the song. the only major automation was the various cut-offs.
not bad, infact i really love this song, its chillaxed and calm but rave worthy at the same time i like that in a song.
im downloading it 5/5ing it and 10/10ing it!
OMG AWESOME!!!
You rock.
i would of loved some piano in there.
just like every 2 bars i would like 3 high frequency piano notes to come in.
i think that would be awesome.
anyway good job, you rock!
keep it up, ill love to hear more
Thanks man =]
out of key...
its really out of key, learn some scales. look on the internet. C Major is a simple one use that until you know some, C major is just A,B,C,D,E,F,G no sharps or flats.
it needs alot of improvement. like the random crashes dont work.
what synth are you using btw its pretty cool.
Thanks for critisism that makes sense and isnt just saying "dude this sucks" or something. And also i think i just used some sort of saw lead or something. Oh and at the end i combined the saw lead with a square lead.
good use of reverb
the vocals were a bit strange in places.
but apart from that, NOT BAD!
Thanks Man. And i know! i love the reverb! My vocals have never been great but i try my best.
Not bad!
All i have to say is:
the main pattern could have been better...
i liked the way it layered up.
good job, i really like it.
9/10, 5/5 and faved.
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