i think a saw...
a saw synth with a techno melody would go nice. i know what i would do in my head, i wish i could show it to you xD
this is very nice im lovin' it.
you have been gone for a long time but you dont fail to amaze me
i think a saw...
a saw synth with a techno melody would go nice. i know what i would do in my head, i wish i could show it to you xD
this is very nice im lovin' it.
you have been gone for a long time but you dont fail to amaze me
I MUST improve a lot of things, but this time ... I CAN!! Now I can save projects, so I'll probably improve it indefinitely.
Thanks, once again, for the tips ^_*. I'll keep your suggestions in mind.
Cheers.
very cool
where have you gone sfapil? i have missed you muchly...
this is very nice, lonely, cold and creepy would make a great intro to a techno song if you brought in a nice melody and a bassline perhaps a guitar would go nicely.
<-Audio-Warfare->
Yeah, I've been rather busy these days and couldn't spend too much time on Newgrounds. (Thanks for caring ^_^)
Thanks for the tips ^_*. I'll see what I can do.
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P.S. have you changed your name?
out of key...
its really out of key, learn some scales. look on the internet. C Major is a simple one use that until you know some, C major is just A,B,C,D,E,F,G no sharps or flats.
it needs alot of improvement. like the random crashes dont work.
what synth are you using btw its pretty cool.
Thanks for critisism that makes sense and isnt just saying "dude this sucks" or something. And also i think i just used some sort of saw lead or something. Oh and at the end i combined the saw lead with a square lead.
good use of reverb
the vocals were a bit strange in places.
but apart from that, NOT BAD!
Thanks Man. And i know! i love the reverb! My vocals have never been great but i try my best.
AHHHH DISTORTION!!!
great tune, AWESOME COMPOSITION, nice synths, i heard nexus in there and sytrus for the bass i think.
needs more variation, was out of key at some points.
PLEASE - please put a limiter on the master track on the mixer the distortion(also known as clipping) is insanely annoying
I dont hear on my speakers for some reason
good job
its a shame this wasnt done on fl studio. if it had a set tempo i would love to add my own little touch to it lol.
we seriously should make a collab piece
that we should beanbag! =D however as far as i am aware the tempo remains the same.. it has a structure.... with decomposes and rebuilds... and even goes half tempo... but the actuall speed is fluent and consistent.... definately. =D=D=D none the less, i really appreciate your input. i think a collab is a good idea. but i have no programs atm. =D tanx man! =D=D=D
NICE!
SOME GO BLIND DUE TO OVER-EXPOSURE TO PURE AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!
not bad, i think it was really cool...
good job.
<-DJGM->
We need eyedrops...
and you call my drums bad!
no offense but these drums are worse than mine... so i dont get where you was coming from. the guitar melody wasnt too good ( i can tell you dont listen to much rock music) the random fast bits ruined it. and had no chords in the structure. this song would of sounded great with some power chords.
oh the hit has kind of ruined it.
not a bad try though...
youve just started with music so keep going! your not doing bad for a beginner .
oh and dont put rate and review until youve got quite a few fans. ive learned myself it kind of pisses people off and your songs get zero bombed
well, i never said my music was better. but n/e way...i liked the hits...lol, w/e, thx for the review and that bit of advice at the end.
i loved hermite
hermite made me laugh so hard.
and now hes gone
:,(
EXCELLENT!
there was nothing about this i didnt like. it was perfect...
the beginning was excellent, i love the way you made a song using just a piano.
with no technical knowledge involved just you your hands and a piano. hehe
it was like 5 piano pieces all sewn together by excellent transition
<-DJGM->
a great piece of work keep it up
thats fab man! thanks for these reviews. it really kind of you. :D:D:D i am pleased you found the transitions worked well, as i say i thought they sounded to different to work together, but i think the ideas work well together some how. thanks so much for this review. your awesome! :D:D:D smile smile smile !
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