georgem124's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mountain View Techno]

not bad!!!

I actually expected some variations of the original melody!

How does it feel to be friends with one of the best authors on newgrounds sfapil?

THATS RIGHT! I GOT BEST OF THE WEEK!

anyways, i havent started yet! ill get to work now! and ill post it tonight!

SFaPiL2 responds:

He he... don't get too cocky. The hard part now is actually staying on top ^_*

Regarding the challenge... Technically you have two advantages:
1) The melody is yours and fits your mentality of music making
2) You've heard mine ^__^

Can't wait to see what you'll come up with.

[Guitar vs Piano (8bit)]

You got the melody wrong

you got the melody wrong. and it was very repetitive. please try harder rofl.

good job nevertheless

pheel responds:

I'm confused.

You realise it's a cover yeah?
Because the melody is right.

I can't even be bothered to try to explain, it's too early

[Dj MIndstompa - Rising Up]

very nice!

ive never actually tried a club song im too used to my trance and techno to try a different genre.

but it sounds very good. good use of reverb kick and a gated sequence.

however i have to drop one point because the transitions werent very good. you just dropped all the instruments and went yer whatever lol.

the vocals arent very good either. you hear those sorts of vocals every day. i would actually just prefer there was no vocals.
the hats were a bit gay. try adding some reverb to give them a more ominous feel or even add a phaser or panner (like you did at the beggining)

dont think im saying the song is bad its very good every song has faults im just pointing them out.

overall though not a bad song.

Dj187 responds:

you, got a good point, atm my studio is stuffed, so i'll get right on it when i got it sorted out, thx

[Hardstyle.... yeah right]

its not that bad.

you have reFX nexus. i recognise the sample used "hands up bells 3" i use it in almost all my songs. you didnt use cosmic coverage or space exploration i always use one of them in my hard style or hardcore songs.

but yer you should try a bit harder. i can tell you put no effort into this

EpicM responds:

yeah i have reFX Nexus

I dont know if you have read but i was really really bored when i made this
just picked a random midi and some samples, the last bit i will use for my next song and im gonna make something based on Frozen Babylon, a song from the Unreal Tournament 3

gonna make something proper after this..

Even so, thank you for the review

[Blood, Bullets & Tears (Old)]

Beautiful

could be better, i can tell your new to ambient style because of the way its composed and the lack of good automation and electronic instruments in the song. this is probably more like classical than anything.

nevertheless not bad. i wish i could comeup with melodies like that. i can make a whole song in seconds after ive made a melody. its just finding that melody that baffles me xD.

SFaPiL2 responds:

Nah... an electronic sounding instrument would've ruined it, I think. However, you're right about the not-being-ambient bit. I guess I'll change the genre to classical then.

Thanks ^_^

[Strawberry Trip [SFPL+Stalag]]

AWESOME!

The combined efforts of two awesome artists. this is what can be done when live music and studio music is combined. we can create beautifl music like this!

i must try to make a song like this.

Audio-Warfa... you know what i cba to put my friggin showname under every comment how about just george xD

SFaPiL2 responds:

Thanks for defining me as awesome ^_^. The true awesome artist is Stalagmite really.

Couldn't agree more. Live instruments give a soul to music that no software can surpass.

Good luck with your future efforts. The way you're improving, you'll become pro in no time ^__^.

[Cavity V1 [SFPL]]

i think a saw...

a saw synth with a techno melody would go nice. i know what i would do in my head, i wish i could show it to you xD

this is very nice im lovin' it.

you have been gone for a long time but you dont fail to amaze me

SFaPiL2 responds:

I MUST improve a lot of things, but this time ... I CAN!! Now I can save projects, so I'll probably improve it indefinitely.

Thanks, once again, for the tips ^_*. I'll keep your suggestions in mind.

Cheers.

[SHORT flash-menu loop [SFPL]]

very cool

where have you gone sfapil? i have missed you muchly...

this is very nice, lonely, cold and creepy would make a great intro to a techno song if you brought in a nice melody and a bassline perhaps a guitar would go nicely.

<-Audio-Warfare->

SFaPiL2 responds:

Yeah, I've been rather busy these days and couldn't spend too much time on Newgrounds. (Thanks for caring ^_^)

Thanks for the tips ^_*. I'll see what I can do.

(...comment continues on Cavity [SFPL] )

P.S. have you changed your name?

[Paradise Haven]

OMG AWESOME!!!

You rock.

i would of loved some piano in there.

just like every 2 bars i would like 3 high frequency piano notes to come in.

i think that would be awesome.

anyway good job, you rock!

keep it up, ill love to hear more

syphonmax responds:

Thanks man =]

[.:TJ:.- Pheonix: Aerostorm]

out of key...

its really out of key, learn some scales. look on the internet. C Major is a simple one use that until you know some, C major is just A,B,C,D,E,F,G no sharps or flats.

it needs alot of improvement. like the random crashes dont work.

what synth are you using btw its pretty cool.

TJTheChill responds:

Thanks for critisism that makes sense and isnt just saying "dude this sucks" or something. And also i think i just used some sort of saw lead or something. Oh and at the end i combined the saw lead with a square lead.