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not bad

you did it pretty well the only things that would of made it better for me are

1) better transitions between verses and chorus

2) The kick should of been more distorted and had alot more bass for hardstyle also reverb would have made it nice =].

3!!!!) ok this would have bumped it up to a ten it was really plain when you just had the percussions and the lyrics going, you should have had a pad in the background or a sweeper of some sort.

could you tell me the tempo on this so i can fix that and slap it on my ipod?

Djzylo responds:

ya, if your talking about bpm it was 140, and thanks for the review, i was still figuring out the master mixer and automation, im currently working on a hardcore song and hopefuly it will be alot better than this, and yeah i know i need base, i just always forget it xD

EXCELLENT

i loved the light synth in the background it really got me bouncing up and down lol.

the lead is nice but later on it gets a bit grainy rave music should have a lead that goes pop boom bang or Pow. your lead sounds like what you would hear in techno. but when it goes away it sounds awesome.

anyway wether it sounds like rave or not ITS STILL AWESOME!!!!

i really enjoyed it (faved)

<-DJGM->

Adachiskindagod responds:

thanks man appreciate it

this should be ambient

Not bad its good infact, but it should be under ambient not dance =]

<-DJGM->

SonicJ responds:

Oh, ambient? Maybe i'll make that change :D
I just thought when I made the break come in to the song, it counted as dance.
Thanks for teh review !
:D

School doesnt totally suck

Itz still an awesome song. but without school you wouldnt be able to show everyone the awesom ass songs you make in gcse music lol. OH WAIT YOUR AMERICAN OHHHH

then yer school sucks

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Bahahaha yepp we're american and american public school blows XD

Not too good personally

I like the fact you didnt just copy the main melody but you should have made the main melody ALOT LOUDER!

also the pad was much too fast. the chorus in the background isnt and hasnt been that fast since halo 1 so. the chorus in the background should be much slower. i like the fact that its in a trance/techno style but i prefer the rock one personally.

Last but not least the whole song didn't sound epic enough, sound effects ruined it in a sense. halo was always an emotional game and had epic exaggerated moments like a massive artifact being dug from the earth by an alien race. it needs an epic sound track this wasnt epic enough.

in the mix i could hear the main theme of halo 1-2 and of course 3 aswell as warrior which was used in sideskirts on halo 2 and Tsavo Highway on halo 3

DjMontana responds:

Hey...

Well it looks to me you already had al youre expectations ready ! And none off them are being filled !
The epic Sound you want was not the way i wanted it to be !
Because this Sound is already used in the original! , thats why i did not make it here, it`s a trance version after all !

Just Using the notes from the original to give it my own vibe !
But everyone is entitled to his opinion...thnx for review.

greetz DJMontana

Is this seriously your song?

its a 1 second loop and the percs suck

MP2E responds:

First try on looping as said below. I know it sucks.

OMG AWESOME

I loved the awesome talkbox style modulation.

the strange sitar like guitar actually fitted in with the song.

i think the talkbox modulation was a bit overpowering though and the kick forced the song to pulse alot.

<-DJGM-> I USED IT

nice one 4/5

SFaPiL2 responds:

Yeah I'm trying to practice with the talkbox thing 'cause I just LOVE how it sounds! :o)

The pulsing was actually made on purpose (my first attempts in sidechaining: check the tutorial in my favorite flash list)

Thanks for listening (and for the awesome score!)

When I'll have a moment I'll surely pay your NG homepage a visit ;o).

Cheers

YAY SFAPIL

Another song. you havent made one in ages man.

good to hear your amazing italian sounds again.

OH AND YOUVE GOT A TAG NOW! [SFPL] isnt a bad one =]

mine is <-DJGM-> =P (not that i ever use it much)

anyway ive got a new song too id like you to check it out or me give me a verdict on it =]

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/liste n/238410

SFaPiL2 responds:

Thanks man! I've been rather busy lately, that's why I haven't been uploading stuff ;oP.

When I'll have time I'll surely go give your stuff a listen :o).

Take care.

WOW!!

Im just happy to find someone with the same music taste as me. Metal, Rock and Dance is a pretty strange taste tbh =]

anyway jebbal rated you 10 so you have been blessed.

i remember this tune from a song somewhere but i cant remember what. Linkinpark maybe?

anyway that doesnt matter GOOD JOB!!!

5/5 from me

<-DJGM->

Rock on Dude

wilb0b responds:

Sweet! thanks man! and yeah metal/rock/dance is pretty weird mix but they're all great!

~WiLb0b

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