not bad too depressing though
the score didnt work for me, just didnt sound right.
techno is supposed to be a sort of underground style music and i dont think platinum works for it neither does lightspeed. try using bassline square from sytrus and various basses and lots of snare, square purity and basic subtracting 2 are the kind of leads you should use for techno.
again ive got a song on my list as an example and i could even send you the project file if you want to take a close look yourself